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              .extended improvement prompt


send a symbol + extra constructive criticism ( if any ) on your view of what i should improve on! i would appreciate the most honest opinion you have, && reblogging this means i will not be offended by any symbols you send in.

when sending these in, feel to slight alter some of the symbol meanings - some have options as shown below. writer are always searching for a way to improve, so be kind && try paying mind to the person you reblogged it from


✎ : your vocabulary tends to be bland / repetitive / basic && you should take small steps in introducing more complex words!
✏ : your vocabulary is WAY too complex ; tone down a little so i can understand what you write
✘  : your characterization is a little off ; it varies from canon in a way that isn’t too great
♥  : your romantic threads are awkward && need a little improvement
ღ : you’re too harsh on yourself ; i actually like you writing a lot
♒ : needs more figurative language ; you tend to state things directly && that makes it bland
❃ : your punctuation / grammar / spelling needs improvement ( exclude any if not relevant )
∞ : you should develop your AU ideas more
☄ : your dialogue is ( boring / repetitive / non-canonical ) && needs to be improved on
❖ : you aren’t respectful to your RP partners / followers
✿ : your character is too perfect ; everyone needs SOME flaws
☂ : you focus TOO MUCH on ( smut / angst / romance ) && I would really love to see you write ( insert genre )
๑  : your writing tends to drag on with unimportant details / you tend to write too much about one particular thing
✄ : you need to improve on ( insert genre ie action / angst ) by ( …insert criticism )
☼ : try to have confidence in yourself ; sometimes your hesitance holds you back
✉ : ( insert other constructive criticism )

 

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"and maybe here"

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"as many as you want, really"

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